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Loves Storm
Contributed by
Kano
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:47:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the distance the thunder crashes
In the sky the lightning flashes
Through the trees the wind does blow
The fragile flakes of the morning snow
All night long I listen to the sound
Of the mighty rocks the waves do pound
And if by chance one rock does break
The mighty hillside the sea might take
The storm rages on like a swarm of bees
It punishes the shores the hills and trees
It reminds me of a love that has been undone
The feelings of the storm could be anyone
But just when I thought it could never end
The sun rises up with a message to send
And just like that the storm fades all out
Like it remembers the love and lost all its doubt
Copyright ©
Kano
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2005-01-23 01:47:21]
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Re: Loves Storm
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:06:33 AM AEST
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| Excellent write. I loved the flow and imagery. |
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Re: Loves Storm
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:06:15 AM AEST
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| I agree with marisa! WoW, what an awesome poem! TD |
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Re: Loves Storm
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:17:51 PM AEST
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WOW!! What an amazing write.. I am glad I stumbled across your work.
Jenni |
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