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Writing in the Sand
Contributed by
Kano
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:28:36 AM in AEST
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On the beach I write your name in the sand
It flows so perfect from my heart, to my hand
I sit there in thought of an angel so true
I sit there all day thinking only of you
The gentle waves start to wash up the name
But I write it again exactly the same
As the sun starts to set in the distance afar
I set there and think of my one shooting star
And into the heavens I search every night
Just for that one star to take its flight
If it takes all night I will search all above
For then I can name it the name I do love
As the moon reflects its image off of the sea
I see your sweet image dancing closer to me
And just when you reach the edge of the shore
I reach my hand out and you are there no more
And as I look down thinking Im wasting my time
I see something new in the sand next to mine
Your name looks so different it can't be true
It now says my beloved I love only you
Copyright ©
Kano
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2005-01-23 01:28:36]
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by CurtisC on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:32:49 AM AEST
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that was great! It created such a wonderful image in my head, it was beautiful :)
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:08:15 AM AEST
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| WOW...BEAUTIFUL! |
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by sojourner on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:52:49 AM AEST
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Very romantic poem,well done.
sojourner, |
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:10:48 AM AEST
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| This was so beautiful and oh what images u put in my head! Can't wait to read more from you! TD |
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:20:45 AM AEST
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Wow this was brilliantly written, such imagery you created with this.
I enjoyed this fab write.
I just love it.
Jane x |
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:36:30 AM AEST
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| very good indeed |
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:15:23 PM AEST
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This was absolutely beautiful. Great imagery.
Welcome to YPDC..
Jenni |
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by supergirlblibs on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:29:53 PM AEST
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| This is really lovely, can only imagine how special it is to fall in love :) xx |
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by doug on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:32:35 AM AEST
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The images you provide here lured me into the poem and gave me a feeling which is comforting and I like that very much.
Quite lovely , Thanks , doug |
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Re: Writing in the Sand
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by brew on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:44:32 PM AEST
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WOW........she meant so much to you. That is the kind of stuff, any one shouldhave to them, especially if they are loved that much. Sorry,!:( great and beautiful write, tho.! You have a talent,
Brew~ |
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