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Dying Dreams
Contributed by
CurtisC
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:00:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've accepted the fact that my dream isn't coming true,
and I've never felt so much pain.
I know now that I'll never get to be with you,
but I still love you more then words can explain.
I always dream about you and I,
and how perfect life could be.
Still I wonder why?
Why I hold on to this love you'll never see.
I can't seem to get rid of it though,
you're still always on my mind.
When will it end, I don't know,
but you won't be left behind.
I'll always love you deep down inside,
this love could never fade.
The day you left a part of me died,
but I'll never forget this mark you've made.
Copyright ©
CurtisC
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2005-01-23 01:00:06]
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Re: Dying Dreams
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:04:43 AM AEST
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| I like the rythim, I also have a problem geting off one topic when I write, I also relate to this and I like it. |
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Re: Dying Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:10:43 AM AEST
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| Great write, as always...you'll put through it though. :-) |
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Re: Dying Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:11:23 AM AEST
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| oops sorry, i wanted to say you'll PULL through it. :-) |
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Re: Dying Dreams
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:05:17 AM AEST
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| hold on to your dreams it might become a reality someday. |
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Re: Dying Dreams
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:13:26 AM AEST
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| Once again Curtis great poem, so heartfelt! TD |
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Re: Dying Dreams
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:24:51 AM AEST
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Aww this is so saw, i can certainly relate to what your saying.
This is one heck of a poem.
Thanks for shring this i loved it.
Jane x |
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Re: Dying Dreams
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by random88 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:14:17 AM AEST
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| I really felt that poem and thought you did an awsome job of expressing yourself, plus i can relate to it. |
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