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Crucified
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:51:52 PM in AEST
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Crucified
The blood drips down
The stem of thorns
As you're crucified
By the carved words
Upon your heart
Of stone
The blood drips down
The cross of death
And taints it
Till your last breath
The thorns that adorn
Your head
Hold the white rose
That dies slowly
With each passing day
That you're still alive
It slowly dies
As the blood drips down
The stem of thorns
From the black rose
Of death
And the petals fall
With your last breath
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-22 21:51:52]
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Re: Crucified
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:58:47 PM AEST
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gave me a shiver with this one great undertones to this piece
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Re: Crucified
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:02:40 PM AEST
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| This was amazing. I loved the last line. |
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Re: Crucified
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:06:52 PM AEST
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| Your bloody amazing..In a heat beat I would publish you if I could..Your on top here.. |
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Re: Crucified
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:12:25 PM AEST
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| incredible imagery, as always. |
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Re: Crucified
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:33:49 PM AEST
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| You always amaze me with your ability with words. |
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Re: Crucified
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:41:22 PM AEST
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| This is so awesome. Amazing imagery. Great job. |
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Re: Crucified
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:41:55 PM AEST
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This is awesome. Very awesome.
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Re: Crucified
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by waos on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:31:00 AM AEST
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Wow that was really good, what a picture, what feeling... it's amazing what simple words strung together can produce.
Nice!
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Re: Crucified
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:01:32 AM AEST
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| Amazing is right.awsome |
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Re: Crucified
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:49:53 PM AEST
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Impressive write, and great imagery. Powerful ending
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