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Waiting for You
Contributed by
Cagedsoul
on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:33:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Waiting waiting
Never hating
Always hoping
Always searching
Maybe maybe
You might not hate me
Please don't go
Please just know
Who who
Waits for you
Everyday
Every way
See see
How I can be
Just ask, and I will leave
Just ask, and I’ll believe
Time time
To end my rhyme
Yes I care
Yes, I swear
Copyright ©
Cagedsoul
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2005-01-22 20:33:00]
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Re: Waiting for You
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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| You have the spark of something here..Your flow was decent and it was a good write..The subject is one not many ppl can really pull off well..Most think thye can but cannot..You are coming very close to it.. |
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Re: Waiting for You
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by cottoncandy on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:28:52 PM AEST
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| creative..i liked the way you set the poem up.. |
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