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Tale of The Peeping Tom
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:25:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It took months of work
To get into position.
I got a locker up against the wall
Between the boys and girls.
I stayed after school
Many times,
To drill through the back.
I put my eye up against the wall
And gazed with amazement
At what I saw.
I was taking it all in.
Then I saw something
I didn't expect.
Another eye, staring back.
Then a small brown circle.
Then I saw stars.
I walked out of the locker room,
Holding my hand over my eye.
I looked through the swelling.
And blushed
With an embarrassed grin.
There she was,
A beautiful girl,
Smiling triumphantly,
And waving at me
With a wooden spoon.
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:29:18 PM AEST
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| You realize this is just lame |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:34:56 PM AEST
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| I agree. This IS pretty goofy. Much peace. |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by subchild on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:47:23 PM AEST
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| You know this is why Women turn bi or lesbian due to dumb ***** like yourself..You realize this is illegal now right moron..Stupid post. |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:08:18 PM AEST
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| Boy...this guy is lucky this is fiction.....Godiva would be ashamed that he got away with it so easily. The poem is definitely not your best.....but it's not horrible either...a little work.... |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:21:36 PM AEST
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| if i was the girl, much worse would have happened... |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:31:06 PM AEST
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I don't really see what the commotion is all about, I mean, it was just a joke and you should be able to write whatever you choose. Of course I'd be angry if you actually did this, but your writing is your writing and I must say it is creative...a bit strange, but creative is good.
Katie |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:37:53 PM AEST
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| i agree with katie, i dont really see what all the negatism (word?) is about, it's just a fictional poem =) |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:44:53 PM AEST
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| It could be two things 1)they didn't realize that it was fictional, or 2)some people are touchy about it...because they experience it, or maybe just really into privacy, but you know, I think that the comment about bi's and lesbians was not quite right... |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:15:28 PM AEST
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| Well I guess everyone has their own opinion, and I enjoyed ur poem. And FYI to the comment bout bi's and lesbians...that's not wat makes ppl go that way! Keep ur poems coming! TD |
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Re: Tale of The Peeping Tom
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:21:41 AM AEST
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Lmao i thought this poem was funny.Lets all have alittle sense of humor,sheesh.
Like he said it was fictional write. so take easy people.Personally i like this write it was funny. |
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