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My StruggleI'm Sorry

Contributed by Cagedsoul on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 07:36:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Paralysing fears
Unrelenting tears
I wasted it all
And now I fall

Can't fight the pain
No more than I can fight the rain
Crap my head hurts
Knees fall to the dirt

Trying to get up
Watch the points rack up
Sometimes its hard to be a man
When your only choice is to make a last stand

On I fight my fight
Deep into the cold and bitter night
This I do for you
Always for you

Why don't you recognize
How I feel inside
Your forcing me to die alone
Forever trying to atone

Forgiveness is all I'm asking for
Girl I'm sorry you were ever ignored
Please this consider
As I lie and whither

If this is too much
Sorry I said such
If there's tears in your eyes
Sorry for all the lies

I feel for you
Really, I do
If this is too much just remember
The times we spent in December

Copyright © Cagedsoul ... [ 2005-01-22 19:36:17]
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Re: My StruggleI'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:35:18 PM AEST
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yea, I like it! I think whoever this was written about should read it, it's well written and really unique. I like this.

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