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One Time Reoccurance

Contributed by AnaBanana on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 07:20:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

One night I needed help
and no one else was there.
Maybe they didn't realize
or maybe they didn't care.

I didn't beg, I didn't cry,
I just simply needed you.
Talking to you makes it better--
all this pain I suffer through.

I poured out all my heart,
but you didn't care to see.
You can't see past the words
that always seem to torture me.

You just blew me off
and I knew I couldn't win.
My walls were crashing down,
my mind was caving in.

I didn't have to think
of what I knew I had to do.
I went upstairs and got the gun
and knew this had to be for you.

My useless life was stopped
as I put bullets through my head.
And at that moment all I thought was
it's over, now I'm dead.

And as I flew to heaven
I looked back and all I saw
was you with my best friend
laughing at it all.

Copyright © AnaBanana ... [ 2005-01-22 19:20:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One Time Reoccurance (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:08:53 PM AEST
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'My walls were crashing down,
my mind was caving in'

ooo...a very nice. i like those two lines much. good form & rhyming...plus i love the way you ended it...kinda sad, but....overall nice job...

Auryn

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