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I won't let them
Contributed by
cottoncandy
on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 06:39:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I won't let them
They won't see me fall
I won't let them
The heck with them all
I won't let them
Bring me down
I gotta be strong
I'll show them
How much i"ve grown
I'll show them their wrong
I won't let them
Tear my hopes and dreams
Haven't they taken enough
I won't scream
It's been rough,
But i'll be fine
They won't take what's mine
I won't let them
Break me down
I'll find the crown
They won't see me frown
I won't let them
Step me down
I won't be their clown
They won't see me drown
I won't let them
I refuse
I won't let them
Take me down
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Re: I won't let them
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 06:42:33 PM AEST
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| Good for you! Great write expressing your strength and confidence. Nice work! |
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Re: I won't let them
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 07:36:42 PM AEST
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| My nieces and nephew are bi-racial and I hope they posess this strenght you show here,great write. |
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Re: I won't let them
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:51:37 PM AEST
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| You speak for everyone. |
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Re: I won't let them
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:35:13 AM AEST
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Bravo, a true poem that a lot of us can relate to.
Thanks for sharing.
Jane x |
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Re: I won't let them
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:26:52 PM AEST
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| Very strong words, excellent expression. Well penned. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: I won't let them
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 12:51:55 AM AEST
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| Good for you. Keep it up. |
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