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Pain
Contributed by
Val-Hundra
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Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:01:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Anger pounding inside my head
Stab me. Shoot me. Kill me. Dead
This pain is strong like a burning flame
Tell me, tell me, who's to blame
I can't endure pain of this kind
Embedded deep within my mind
Bleeding, screaming, torn apart
This pain, my blood, is in my heart
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2005-01-22 11:01:04]
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Re: Pain
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:36:35 AM AEST
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I like this. I sorta thought it was a bit short though, I bet it would be great with some more added on to it.
I can see the anger in this very well.
Stay strong.
*hugs* Phil xx |
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Re: Pain
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 02:07:41 PM AEST
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ahh
the bittersweet feel of pain.....well done. |
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