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frustration
Contributed by
silverpoppy
on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:21:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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desperate and screaming
i curse and cry
condeming the night air,
and my-self
frustrated and wrong,
always wrong
i'm not really here
or there
hellish nightmare of life
or death
i can't tell which
but is there a difference?
time will tell
there's no hiding or denying
it all comes out in the end
in truth there is no difference
the end result it the same
and inconsequentially nothing
it doesn't matter what we say or do
it's all forgotten in the end
and washed away by the seas of life
and death
Copyright ©
silverpoppy
... [
2005-01-22 01:21:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: frustration
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:56:08 AM AEST (User
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Good write. I can really tell you were frustrated when you wrote this. |
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Re: frustration
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:16:19 AM AEST (User
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I hear you, you have displayed your emotions very well. Good venting.
Jane x |
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Re: frustration
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:19:27 PM AEST (User
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good poem. your emotions really made it to the paper and it sounds so sincere, i'm sure everybody's been where u were when u wrote this. |
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Re: frustration
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 03:16:03 AM AEST (User
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I say your emotions bounces of the computer screen.well done |
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