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Do you think?

Contributed by Angelluv2write on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:57:04 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Written:1-19-05

Do you think if I just quit trying chasing the simple things in life they’ll finally come to me?
Do you think if I stop working on my end, let them know I’ve about had it they’ll finally work with me?
Do you think I can finally get the chance to feel the warmth of the light, that it’s finally going to be my time to shine? Instead, of having the glare blind me from the side-lines?

Do you think anything can come from our last show down? Will it take not being polite and stating facts that may seem as threats? What I represent is not a facade or a stigma like they maybe use to seeing. I am true to my word; and my word is true.

I sound like a broken record I know. Consider this though, if this cycle sugar coating and, empty verbs would just stop and we can get real for once then we could work together on moving on, but that never happened. Instead, I was miss-led; miss-led by you and people like you. Please stop categorizing me, my outer appearance is deceiving you and I don’t know why; why?

The way I am is not for show, I am fortunate in many ways and because I am, and I didn’t come from the words: “broken down” you think I don’t need help or have the right to have an equal opportunity. Do you think you could stop being so lackadaisical long enough to realize this whole thing is wrong, and I’m not? What do you think?

Copyright Â© Angelluv2write ... [ 2005-01-21 20:57:04]
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Re: Do you think? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 09:04:51 PM AEST
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I think that whatever is making you angry needs to be informed. You're scary through words. Your point would get across I think.

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