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Invisible Visitor
Contributed by
vampy
on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:51:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The whispering wind
winds itself through
the old, oak tree,
past the radiant river,
and over the high hills.
The whispering wind
whips itself through
the wild, weeping willow,
past the soundless stream,
and over the house's height.
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2005-01-21 19:51:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Invisible Visitor
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:12:12 AM AEST (User
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this seems almost like a tongue twister for me..but the language is striking..good job. |
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