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Rusty kisses
Contributed by
SlimStaple
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:29:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Come on
Let us fall for that
That old cheap romance
Two hearts beating as one
You can make me a mix tape
I will blow you kisses when no one is looking
High school sweethearts bonded for like
Doesn’t it sound grand?
And when we’re old, love just a dust memory
I will blow your pictures a rust kiss
Thinking back to when fresh love was is bloom
It is an old tale, told many times over
However, young love will always be real
Even after the frost of age has covered the bloom
Copyright ©
SlimStaple
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2005-01-21 19:29:33]
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Re: Rusty kisses
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:37:32 PM AEST
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| Indeed. Young love will always be real. If it is true, then it will stay young forever. |
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Re: Rusty kisses
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by sick_n_twisted on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:50:18 PM AEST
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| yes young love is true love especially when its your first time.great write |
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Re: Rusty kisses
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by Spike on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 04:32:11 AM AEST
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Wow. Planning ahead, aren't we? Lovely sentiment, sweet expression. Its good to catch up and see how your poetry is developing and maturing.
Spike |
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Re: Rusty kisses
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:01:28 AM AEST
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Ahh young love how i miss it so. This is such a creative write. I liked it tons.
Jane x |
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