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Eternal torment in hell

Contributed by blacksabbath026 on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 06:35:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As they sat on the rock, lost in each others eyes
Their lips drew closer,
Bliss dosent describe the feeling
They felt when their lips met

The secret she kept, the lie she told him
It came out in the form of a boy
As he caught them, he draws his gun
Putting a hole though her lovers head

Her screams resound through the mountains
They grow louder as he starts to brutally beat her
Watching as she cowers in the corner
Begging for mercy, a smile appears on his face

Her pain has yet begun, he comes toward her
Terror growing with every step he takes
Evil radiating out of his eyes
He savagely rapes her and sends bullets through her heart

He walks away crying, memories attacking without mercy
He wishes the memories away, the gun fits perfectly in his mouth
Regretting killing the only person he ever loved
The last bullet sends him to his fate, eternal torment in hell

Copyright © blacksabbath026 ... [ 2005-01-21 18:35:09]
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Re: Eternal torment in hell (User Rating: 1 )
by alliecat on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:07:15 PM AEST
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the vivid description left me feeling the pain that he felt.....i like the poem alot....keep writing

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