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A letter from God
Contributed by
Onangelswings
on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 04:52:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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My heart is healed, but you can see the scars
Scars that the years have left behind
God take my heart and make it brand new
God told me if I did you wouldn't be you
You need to hurt and learn to heal
You need to learn all the different ways you can feel
But God I asked, why leave the scars
The are ugly and painful, this is going too far
The scars will stay, sorry my dear
You will see them year after year
They are your character and who you have been
They are a reflection of your every sin
Now take your heart out and hold you head high
I breathed a deep and heavy sigh.
God said then, Your life has meaning and happiness too
That is because my child, I love you.
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Onangelswings
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2005-01-21 16:52:37]
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Re: A letter from God
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by XOashleyreneXO on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:19:24 PM AEST
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deep...very deep...i love it. a very good write especially if you have scars on you.
-ashley rene- |
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Re: A letter from God
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:33:52 PM AEST
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| Good reflection on how God uses circumstances in our lives to mold us. I think there is truth in that our decisions and sins we have committed to aid in shaping our character. |
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Re: A letter from God
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:11:28 PM AEST
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| Wow, very deep poem. We all have our scars that show who we are. But without them, would we really be who we are? .............Mike |
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Re: A letter from God
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:10:55 PM AEST
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| This is really good, a lot of food for thought. It makes me realize that my scars are very much a part of who I am today. Also, thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. |
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