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Why Cant
Contributed by
dreaming-of-your-love
on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 04:33:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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why cant you see me
why cant you help me
why is it every time i look over you dont smile
why is it everytime you see me you run
why
why cant you cry on my shoulder
why cant you make me happy
why
is it because i die 3 years ago
or is it beacuse you relly cant see me
you will all ways be in my heart
even if you dont wanted to see me
so everytime you start to cry
just look over your shoulder
and you will see me
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Re: Why Cant
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:51:03 PM AEST
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Verybeautifull, dedication of luv.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Why Cant
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by thumper on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:22:16 AM AEST
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Unrequited love.......so heartbreaking. I liked this. Keep up writing, Dream, and I'll keep on commenting,(even if it takes me awhile to get to your writes :o} , sorry).
Luv ya,
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Re: Why Cant
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by jessejames on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:10:43 PM AEST
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| great write nice job |
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