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Ode de spermarket
Contributed by
jace
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:06:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Lonesome I wander the aisles
The super market seems empty tonight
The fluorescents flicker never a constant light
The frozen food aisle is cold
The pre packaged convenience food's make me lonely tonight
Every TV diner packaged in a perfect mold
Were closing in 5 minutes announces the microphone
Please bring your purchase to register 3
I probably should go home but that is not were i want to be
At the register 3 a man pays and storms out the door
$29.50 for a dozen of stem cut flowers
At least he has someone to buy them for
I have this grocery store to wandering for hours
Copyright ©
jace
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2005-01-21 12:06:16]
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Re: Ode de spermarket
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:11:04 PM AEST
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| Yeah, some people have trouble counting their blessings. This is a touching story. Blessings. |
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Re: Ode de spermarket
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 03:16:27 PM AEST
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Im feeling this great expression
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Re: Ode de spermarket
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by Spike on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 04:39:20 AM AEST
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And if libraries and art galleries were open late, they'd be packed too. There are a lot of lonely hearts out there, including mine, sometimes. Nice write.
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Re: Ode de spermarket
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by Beniam on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:58:05 PM AEST
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Jace, very well done. I think this is my fav of your work.
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