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Feeling down
Contributed by
stonedraider23
on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:21:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Depressed
Feeling down
Tears begging to pour
Heart throbbing ready to burst
My mind tossing and turning
Wanting a way out
Needing to find a way out
Trapped inside
Locked behind my wall
Any worse I think I could do it
End it all
Bust down the wall
Set myself free from myself
Taking the knife pressing down, pulling back
A pain that I feel is wonderful
A pain I have never felt before
A pain that relieves all
Tears rolling down my face
I never wanted to do this
I never wanted to end it this way
I'm here alone without you
Fighting through this alone
Cutting deeper and deeper
Watching myself fall slowly
I wrote our names in my blood
I seen your smiling face just before I blacked out
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2005-01-21 05:21:35]
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Re: Feeling down
(User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:31:25 PM AEST
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| I saw your face..not I seen your face.. |
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Re: Feeling down
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:11:36 PM AEST
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| aww,ur not fighting this alone hun,we're all around u trying to help u,just open up ur pretty eyes and let urself realize,love ya,good write |
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