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An Angel Weeps
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 03:08:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She weeps
The tears trickle down from her eyes
To her hands and then to the pedestal
A rose blooms from the tears
Red gorgeous and in full bloom
It asked the angel why she cried
And then the angel said
I fear I will not always be beautiful
For the one I love
And the rose spoke again asking
Why she felt that way
The angel said
For some of her feathers were falling away
The rose said it was normal and they
Would soon grow back even more beautiful than before
But the angels just did not feel well
Her sadness grew as she remembered all the happiness she felt
The rose could not stand to see her cry so she wilted away
And the angel looked up and felt sad and alone again
She missed her love and wanted to see him
But she felt ashamed at how she looked
And so her sadness grew yet again
And now she was on her knees
She started to look pale
And all the color was
Just fading
Away
And
She stared to feel cold and stiff
But could not stop crying
The tears came like
Crashing waves
That wouldn’t
Recede
So
She slowly turned to stone
And was kept there
Frozen in light and beautiful
But her love came and cried
Because he could not feel her soft skin again
And slowly he too then turned to stone
And both were there locked within
A timeless dream
Both the statues and many more nice thing can be bought at
http://www.pyramidcollection.com/
it is also were I buy alot of my wicca stuff
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Re: An Angel Weeps
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by craz2 on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 06:37:46 AM AEST
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| This was very comforting. I am waiting to locked in a timeless dream with the one a care for.a |
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Re: An Angel Weeps
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by brew on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 09:57:10 AM AEST
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Loved it....all, including the beautiful pics.!
Brew~ |
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Re: An Angel Weeps
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:26:53 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful
Lov eSweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: An Angel Weeps
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:03:08 PM AEST
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Dorien this poem is just mind blowing, you have captivated me with such imagery that its beyond words. Good poem as always.
Jane x |
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Re: An Angel Weeps
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 03:25:49 PM AEST
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a lovely captivating write tos ay the least
Michelle |
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Re: An Angel Weeps
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:29:11 PM AEST
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Amazing write, i loved every word. The pictures painted in my mind were beautiful.
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