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Why?
Contributed by
o7neves
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Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:36:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I have my highs and I have my lows
But I can hide it well so that nobody knows
I look for love, but in all the wrong places
And I find myself doing all of the chasing
I need to relax, sit back and just breathe
In order to keep my body at ease
I need to be loved, be loved by you
But we’ll never be one only always as two
Why does life always have a way of doing this to me?
Never letting things be the way I want them to be
My attraction to you is so much more than physical
And when you’re not around I’m stuck in a bad musical
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o7neves
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2005-01-21 01:36:09]
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Re: Why?
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:58:03 AM AEST
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| yes life is a big drag but you know we all gotta be stronge and except what happens in the future.good luck.good write. |
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Re: Why?
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:14:47 AM AEST
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| wow, this is great and i can really relate to ur feelings....well done...i loved reading this and know what its like to look "for love in the wrong places" |
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Re: Why?
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:54:28 AM AEST
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I can relate to this a little, nothing has really gone my way in life either for a while. But you know things have to get better, why would you let yourself make things worse? Great poem, and yes musicals are no good :)
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Re: Why?
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by Dec2three198five on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:28:18 PM AEST
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| OH man, I love this one. THis is up there with Mark. 33 |
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Re: Why?
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by mazeof_darkness on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 10:23:18 PM AEST
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| It always seems the things we want most we can never have. I can definitely relate. |
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Re: Why?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:51:16 PM AEST
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| Great write. I can relate. :-) |
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