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Trival
Contributed by
night_goddess666
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:18:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can't believe it happened.
I can't believe I lost it all.
But most importantly....I lost you.
I came back into my realm,
the lost world that was once mine.
I came back to see the broken dreams
That use to be ours.
I found your picture on the floor
the memories returned to me.
My eyes flooded with tears
As I remembered what they did to you.
To see your face reminds me that Heaven does exist.
But then I realize that I am wandering through hell
Because you are not here to guide me...my angel.
You were the purest of God's creations
And you chose me to be your love.
I laugh at the thought of the little things,
The things you use to care so much about.
I thought that they were sort of trival,
But I was wrong,
For now nothing is trival.
How can a real love like ours
linger when you're not here with me.
Not here to comfort me,
Not here to shelter me in your embrace,
Not here to kiss my tears away.
But that is now in the past.
All of your pictures, I took and threw them into the fire
I don't need them anymore
I don't need any of the bits and pieces
that survived after all this time.
I never really needed them to remember you.
I will seek revenge for you, my love.
The ones that destroyed us
will know be destroyed.
And after that I can finally be at peace,
As I lay my head down
and see your smiling face once more.
Copyright ©
night_goddess666
... [
2005-01-20 21:18:15]
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Re: Trival
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by littlemo911 on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:23:52 PM AEST
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| i wander if it comes from a personal experience rather from a movie. hmmm....? |
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Re: Trival
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:56:08 PM AEST
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| I haven't seen the movie, but this was an emotional write. Cheers! |
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Re: Trival
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by crazygirl on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:45:23 PM AEST
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| Great movie just to say, but yea the poem totaly rocked!! It really suits the movie, but im sure it could tie in with alot of people. It very good, keep 'em comin!! |
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Re: Trival
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by nanonan on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 01:11:39 PM AEST
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| There is something more than the movie here... I really think that this is a real event... something that either happened to you, or to someone close to you... I don't think a movie could evoke all... that... ! It was well written, and I can almost feel the sorrow and tragedy in the poem... I can't see any way this poem could be improved... I loved it... *heart* |
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