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CANDLE LIT
Contributed by
Alexander_McDonald
on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Candle wicks,
And incense.
Burning,
Perfuming.
Romantic scents,
Blooming.
Shadows,
On the wall.
Entrancing.
Wrestling,
Dancing,
They rise and fall.
Smoky tendrils,
Raised,
On the wind.
Drifting silently,
Caressing,
Sweat glazed,
Naked skin.
Copyright © 1993 by Alexander McDonald
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2002-12-06 18:40:00]
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Re: CANDLE LIT
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by OreO on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:02:45 PM AEST
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This is a very soothing peaceful poem, i enjoyed this one alot...you should try somthing lyrical with candles....i think you could write a good lyrical song with such beautiful words....thanks for sharing this one....
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Re: CANDLE LIT
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by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:36:03 PM AEST
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wonderful poem
it is so sweet . |
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Re: CANDLE LIT
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 10:26:33 AM AEST
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| Sensual thoughts...simply stated...well done my friend! Larry |
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Re: CANDLE LIT
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by Sanju on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 08:00:41 AM AEST
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Simply superb!
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