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Sexy Poem
Contributed by
Oriana
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:20:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Cool my body and set fire to my soul.
Make me scream and whisper the pleasure you will do to me.
Tell me you love me and that I`m yours.
Speak truths to my heart
while giving me wings to fly.
Copyright ©
Oriana
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2005-01-20 19:20:54]
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Re: Sexy Poem
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by justjonesy on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:29:41 PM AEST
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| great job...its so short but done very well....loved it |
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Re: Sexy Poem
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by QueenEEliz33 on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:40:52 PM AEST
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| it was really good, even tho it was short, i wonder what you were on? cuz some things to be on gives you different visions than others |
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Re: Sexy Poem
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by freckle on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:13:00 PM AEST
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| I liked it, good poem...then again, I'm on something..lol. J/K Good job! |
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Re: Sexy Poem
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by sojourner on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:54:09 PM AEST
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Short and sweet, that the only downside to pleasure,it only last for awhile but while were flying above the clouds, we think it will last forever,but everyone falls back to the earth,Ouch.
sojourner, |
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Re: Sexy Poem
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:10:19 PM AEST
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Well it is sexy, but I've seen much more erotic stuff in the general area. Heck, I've *written* much more erotic stuff in the general area! lol
Short but sexy write, imo. Cheers! |
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