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J's poem . .
Contributed by
Marisa_A_sydney
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Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:13:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It all started the way she addressed me
In the instant absence of my ego
And it is so like her to catch me off guard
But nevertheless, her soft malted fingertips passing from the front of my cheeks to the back of my ear
And then my daily prize resting against her daily prize
Completely tangled, competing unnecessarily
There’s nothing that I could say to maintain her hypnotization
And then confidently after kissing me, had the audacity to not even say goodnight
But I knew that eventually her confidence would have aroused me to an experience where none shall forget
Though the evening passed through gay laughing and unnecessary entertainment
She celebrated within my vulnerability
Ever so often in between my silent insecurities
I grasped for her comfort
Whilst my heart beat fast to the flashing lights of idleness
There is no control…
And then she guided me to a place that I’ve seen before
But never in it’s image or likeness
Daring to believe it is because of her presence
Though my insecurity suffered the improbability of our motives
We both giggled at the inappropriation
But she does remember who I am
And I still beg to know what we are…
" J "
12 October 2004
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Re: J's poem . .
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:19:03 PM AEST
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Interesting.....trying to figure it out ...lol
Hugs and Love...
Jenni |
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Re: J's poem . .
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:22:59 AM AEST
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This is the depth of a relationship. There is more that i could say but that would take away from the spirit of this poem.
I wish there was something more than the question of love to define your relationship. That is why it did not last. He never once in this poem said that he loved you. |
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Re: J's poem . .
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by Marisa_A_Sydney on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 05:16:08 AM AEST
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| Archie, you're right.. it's only now... 6 yrs after that I understand this poem completely. This spoke about an experience that was great for us both... and that's all it was.. an experience that we both won't ever forget. |
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