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Expectations
Contributed by
breny
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Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 04:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I don't expect diamonds
I don't expect pearls
I don't expect you
to look at other girls
I don't expect to be happy
twenty-four/ seven
I don't expect to be treated
like an angel from heaven
I don't expect you to catch
every tear that I cry
But I do expect you
to stay by my side
I don't expect to be given
the stars form the sky
I don't expect an "I love you"
every time we say good-bye
I don't expect to be smothered
in gifts mile high
And when I ask for the truth
I don't expect you to lie
I don't expect promises
that I know you can't keep
I don't expect to be left
at night while I sleep
I don't expect you
to try and give me the world
All I expect from you
is unconditional love
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-01-20 16:38:34]
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Re: Expectations
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by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:30:16 PM AEST
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Very good poem. Your last stanza throws it off a bit, but nevertheless- a very good read.
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Re: Expectations
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:32:57 PM AEST
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" . . .suffering has been stronger than all other teaching, and has taught me to understand what your heart used to be. I have been bent and broken, but - I hope - into a better shape."
Charles Dickens now that is real Expectations
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Re: Expectations
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:57:40 PM AEST
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a very powerful poem, stated clearly, your telling like it is again, great style, your quickly progressing
from a diamond in the rough 2 a well cut gem i read it twice and noticed, this poem takes on a life of it's own . . .
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Re: Expectations
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:35:18 PM AEST
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| expect nothing and never suffer dissapointment. you shouldnt expect it, it should be given without it being expected. excellent talent used to create a brilliant poem. |
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Re: Expectations
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:42:35 PM AEST
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beautiful, great style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa
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