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A reminder of truth
Contributed by
zenmind
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 03:41:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Among the many tourists
there is a savored savior,
who lasts only as long
as time will tell.
A beating stream
whose heart fills the empty space between
each souless tourist.
The unified spirit,
a reminder that every plastic bag,
every hand held cell phone,
every human grasped hook, is loose
and every sky structure will fall.
The ground will turn inside out
and what will be left?
This one graced savior,
a bodyless breath which outlasts
any motor mouthed squeak.
And teaches the same song, every minute.
We will all hear as the waves crash
and we will all remember that this last
strum....humm.....has always been present
inspite of all of our mindless chatter,
boxes full of remote controls,
guys night out,
drunk,
hands squashed under the pressure
of the desperate girl,
drunk,
desiring sweetness
that is foolishly saught for
in dark corners,
with shady addicts,
a false sensation.
When all of our lies fade into the ocean,
rising higher than death,
the only thing that will be left
is what is always here.
The reminder of what is true,
untouched,
quietly pulsating within our eyes.
Copyright ©
zenmind
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2005-01-20 15:41:43]
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Re: A reminder of truth
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by shelby on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 04:21:00 PM AEST
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I love the way this all came together and makes me think so intently as reading it very vivid images and details a great write
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Re: A reminder of truth
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 04:32:54 PM AEST
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| Powerful write. You have a way building up a sensation of anticipation and dread....very well done! |
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Re: A reminder of truth
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:02:00 PM AEST
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Zenmind, this piece is nothing less than perfect from you, dear friend!!! Incredible! Your way of manipulating the mind to create such vivid images and evoke so many emotions at the same time... You are truly talented, and an amazing individual! BRAVO! The whole thing was just... enchanting, like a dream....surreal, unpredictable, beautiful.... LOVED IT!! Thanks so much for the lovely comments, cheri ami! Always a pleasure hearing from you. Aurevoir for now! All my love and blessings of course! Forever,
Your dear friend and fervent fan,
Stephy *Fleur* |
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