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My final prayer
Contributed by
crazylady
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:54:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm dying inside
look at this torn flesh
and this raw hide
love is harmful
and yet so powerful
i cannot describe
love saved me
but it cost me my life
love kills me
each and every day
but tonight ive decided
i get on my knees and pray
"Father please help me.
I dont know what to do.
All i kno is that
Soon i will be with you"
"Father of heaven and earth
forgive me of my sin
help me to stay strong
and let this blade stab in"
"Father i have not been the best
christain i could be.
but father please put my fears to rest
and say 'Come on Ceciley'"
"in the bible it says love one another as i loved you
but how can the love i shared cause so much pain?
just like you hung on the cross
i feel internaly slain!"
and then i end my prayer
with a hushed "amen"
and then i pull out a knife
and let my final blood bath begin
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2005-01-20 11:54:42]
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Re: My final prayer
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by QueenEEliz33 on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:37:14 PM AEST
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| the poem really flows well, i like how you changed the pace |
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Re: My final prayer
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by Deablo on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:17:26 PM AEST
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| very good writing strong and right to the point. You discribe the feelings very good. keep writing... |
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