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Losing Everything
Contributed by
CurtisC
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Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 02:30:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You're the best thing I've ever known,
it's gonna hurt to say goodbye.
Once you go I'm all alone,
left starring up at the sky.
The stars remind me of your face,
so beautiful, so bright.
It's not so bad here in this place,
but without you it just doesn't feel right.
My heart has ached since I got the news,
"My family is moving away."
I'm losing the one thing I didn't want to lose,
the girl I think about everyday.
Sometimes I wish I didn't care as much,
and feel the way that I do.
But since I do we better keep in touch,
cause I'm not completely losing you!
Copyright ©
CurtisC
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2005-01-20 02:30:18]
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Re: Losing Everything
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 03:53:07 AM AEST
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| A very beautiful poem..... Magnificant write! |
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Re: Losing Everything
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by jace on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 12:03:32 PM AEST
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I feel ya
I know how it feels and I think you displayed
it well in your write very well writen
bravo |
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Re: Losing Everything
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by shelby on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 02:17:11 PM AEST
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touching write once again. I hate the goodbyes thats the hardest part but the way this sounds I think you will stay in touch you wont lose her forever......
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Re: Losing Everything
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by juliette on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:38:58 PM AEST
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This is the sweetest poem I have read in forever. Awwww - hope she isn't too far away. Send her this if you haven't already - I bet she cries....
Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: Losing Everything
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:53:49 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write. That girl is lucky to have a guy that cares and loves her so much! |
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Re: Losing Everything
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:59:40 PM AEST
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| Aww Curtis, what a beautiful write. Once again good luck with this girl. TD |
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