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Burgundy blue and broken dreams(cinders)
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:26:34 AM in AEST
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Everyday, i remember you.
Your smile left me hanging;
my throat stretched before you,
an altar to your love.
On the first day of our embrace
the mute and silicone rains
slithered down an empty glass;
your eyes your fingers
pressed across the
moonlight
the cinders of your kiss
your breath a burgundy
of blue and broken dreams.
I sat and watched you play
across the waters of my breast
your lips your tongue
the calm crusade
of your heart
open before me.
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iodinelove
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2005-01-20 01:26:34]
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Re: Burgundy blue and broken dreams(cinders)
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by Tanna on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 07:01:45 AM AEST
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| I like the imagery used here. Title drew me in. Good write! |
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Re: Burgundy blue and broken dreams(cinders)
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:54:20 AM AEST
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| very sweet! great wording, your imagery is wonderful. loving it. |
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