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The Way
Contributed by
stew
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:47:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love the way you look at me
Like I'm the only one in the world
You help me recognize my beauty
My heart you have unfurled.
I love the way you make my heart skip
Whenever I see you look at me
The way you make my knees shake
And my face goes up a degree.
I love the way you make me giggle
When I hear you cute, silly laugh
It makes me feel whole again
I feel you are my other half.
I love the way you make me go weak
When we hug or kiss
I can't wait for the first time
We make love in bliss.
I love the way you hold me in you arms
And run your fingers through my hair
And the way you say "I love you!"
It really shows me that you care.
I love you cute, sexy voice
And how you call to hear mine
You say it makes you feel better
My tongue you have entwined.
I love the way I miss you
Everyday and sleepless night
The way I dream about you
Just makes it feel so right.
I love the way I love you
With all my heart and soul
I don't think you meant to
But my heart you have stole!
Copyright ©
stew
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2005-01-19 22:47:42]
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Re: The Way
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:29:22 PM AEST
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| Romantic and heartfelt write! Great job. I really liked it. |
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Re: The Way
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 12:17:33 AM AEST
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wonderful poem, i really liked it :)
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Re: The Way
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by breny on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:52:44 PM AEST
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great poem. i like it alot but some of the rhymes feel forced...if that makes sense. but it shows a lot of emotion :-)
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