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American Love
Contributed by
skelington
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Exchanging beauty
For the ashes
Given my heart
To nothing real
I've given my heart away
To so many things
So many times I've failed
Help me stop this endless cycle
Remind me of how it can be
Take me back
I surrender all
Without you
My heart is broken
I never should have let you go
I never should have let you slip
Through my arms
As the sun sets tonight
I'll hold you with all that I am
I never should have let you go
Promise me
You'll stay with me forever
Forever
Forgive me
For running so quickly to the outside
Copyright ©
skelington
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2005-01-19 22:30:00]
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Re: American Love
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by jjones12 on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:36:28 PM AEST
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Good write, keep it up!
=Jen= |
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Re: American Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:46:31 PM AEST
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Sweet write.
"As the sun sets tonight
I'll hold you with all that I am"
Heartfelt line.
Beautiful work. |
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Re: American Love
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 02:45:27 AM AEST
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great job, i liked this poem a lot.
Curtis |
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Re: American Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:43:28 PM AEST
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| This is very emotional and so sad too. I like the addition of the last line. Asking for forgiveness is always so appealing. Anyway, nice write! Blessings. |
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