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Pain
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:02:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I never thought there was such a person...
That could make me hurt
Someone that could make me feel...
Less then dirt
Someone nothing more then..
My Pain
I never thought there was a person...
That could ease the pain
Someone that could make me feel...
More the same
Someone nothing more then...
A flirt
You make me hurt...
But you ease my pain
You make me feel less then dirt...
But more the same
Loving someone nothing more then a flirt
Ended up being nothing more then...
My Pain
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2005-01-19 22:02:02]
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Re: Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kuro_Mirai on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:09:30 PM AEST
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| Great job, ForeverAlone, that was a great poem. You expressed how you felt really well. I like it, you're really talented. |
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Re: Pain
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:12:38 PM AEST
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| Good write. I've felt like this... |
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