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Butterflies
Contributed by
freckle
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:21:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Butterflies are dear
They bring happiness to us
I wish I had some.
Copyright ©
freckle
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2005-01-19 21:21:02]
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Re: Butterflies
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:54:13 PM AEST
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| Good job, I think this is the first Haiku that I found rather catchy to say. I'm gonna go ahead and say it out loud for a few minutes. |
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Re: Butterflies
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by TaintedSoul on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:49:06 PM AEST
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The great thing about Haiku is the fact that they express such emotion and/or images in such few words. Enjoyed.
peace
TS |
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Re: Butterflies
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 06:32:33 PM AEST
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This is lovely Carol. Yes, you do have butterflies. I know you do, because you have life.
Raquel Leah ; )) |
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