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Jamie
Contributed by
Rain_Dancer
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:52:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Jamie was a young girl,
Who always wanted to explore the world,
As she went by the window and felt so free,
She even felt the morning breeze,
Tommorow was her first day of school,
And she knew she would rule the school,
Yea her first day was great,
Heck! She even got a date,
Then one day Jamie had a thought in her head,
That could somehow could make her end up dead,
She wanted to stay at a party the next night,
And she would be home before the morning light,
"I don't have to tell the truth, Jamire thought,
"Besides, what do I have to loose?"
She asked her parents if she cold go over to her friends,
And stay the night,
Her parents nodded her heads and said "Alright",
Yea the pizza was great,
And the party was fun,
But the midnight ride,
Was soon to come,
Her boyfriend had a few drinks that night,
But he kissed Jamie and said he was "alright",
As they rode in a car,
And there was a huge flash,
"Oh god help us!",
"Where going to crash!,
Everything went black,
As Jamie heard,
"Call an ambulance these kids need help fast!"
Jamie woke up in a hospital bed,
A nurse put a cloth on top of her head,
"What happend to the other car,
Are they alright?"
The nurse was motionless,
She looked as she was about to cry,
"Tell my parents I'm sorry I lied,
It is all my fault that so many have died",
Jamie suddenly faded away,
As the doctor came to take her away,
"Nurse, why didden't you try your best,
To answer her last request?"
"Because her parents died,
With all the rest...."
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Rain_Dancer
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2005-01-19 20:52:05]
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Re: Jamie
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by Kione on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:10:21 PM AEST
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| Wow.....Wow.....If that's a true story, I'm going to have to cry. Her lie killed. So much for the little white lie... |
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Re: Jamie
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:32:11 AM AEST
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wow, this sounds so much like a fwd thats being sent around:
Jenny was so happy about the house they had found.
For once in her life it was on the right side of town.
She unpacked her things with such great ease.
As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze.
How wonderful it was to have her own room.
School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon.
There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy
It's just the way she wanted her life to be.
On the first day of school, everything went great.
She made new friends and even got a date!
She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be,
Because I just got a date with the star of the team!"
To be known in this school you had to have a clout,
And dating this guy would sure help her out.
There was only one problem stopping her fate.
Her parents had said she was too young to date.
"Well, I just won't tell them the entire truth.
They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?"
Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night.
Her parents frowned but said, "All right."
Excited, she got ready for the big event
But as she rushed around like she had no sense,
She began to feel guilty about all the lies,
But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride?
Well the pizza was good, and the party was great,
But the moonlight ride would have to wait.
For Jeff was half drunk by this time.
She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble,
And heard, call an ambulance!
These kids are in trouble!
Voices she heard...a few words at best.
But she knew there were two cars
involved in the wreck.
Then wondered to herself if Jeff was all right,
And if the people in the other car were alive.
She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad.
"You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad."
These voices echoed inside her head,
As they gently told her that Jeff was dead.
They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do.
But it looks as if we'll lose you too."
"But the people in the other car!? "Jenny cried.
"We're sorry, Jenny, they also died."
Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done
I only wanted to have just one night of fun."
"Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim,
And wish I could return their families to them."
"Tell Mum and Dad I'm sorry I lied,
And that it's my fault so many have died.
Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?"
The nurse just stood there-she never agreed.
But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes.
And a few moments later Jenny died.
A man asked the nurse,
"Why didn't you do your best?"
To bid that girl her one last request?"
She looked at the man with eyes so sad.
"Because the people in the other car
were her mum and dad."
if you wrote that too, its great!
if not... |
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Re: Jamie
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by Rain_Dancer on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:55:22 AM AEST
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| yea me and my best friend wroe that then I re-wrote it |
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