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Drunk off Tears; Soon Falling Down
Contributed by
sorryiforgot2smile
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:28:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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teathered infidel screams in silence
warcries heard from nameless towns
masked emotion blackened eyelids
drunk off tears soon falling down
crimson shackles and cracked rear windows
silhouettes of timeless beauty
embers crackled when heard the windblow
cast shadows upon apendage pertruding
exhuding circumstancial evidence
warcries heard from nameless towns
murderous rouge glows rhythmic prevelance
drunk off tears soon falling down
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Re: Drunk off Tears; Soon Falling Down
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:32:13 PM AEST
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| Good write. It's very interesting...very deep. Nice work! |
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Re: Drunk off Tears; Soon Falling Down
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 05:54:10 AM AEST
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wow, this is amazing... well done!!!!
exhuding circumstancial evidence
warcries heard from nameless towns
murderous rouge glows rhythmic prevelance
drunk off tears soon falling down
awesome...
keep up the good work!!! |
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