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Rape Me
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:15:03 PM in AEST
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Rape Me
Replace your need
Displace your creed
Misplace your dreams
Rape me
With what could be
Change me
With what used to be
Hate me
With what will never be
You're free
From need
Without me
You're free
From creed
Without Thee
You're free
From dreams
That'll never be
Waste me
With your need
Taint me
With your creed
Face me
With your dreams
Take everything
And leave nothing
But pain to bleed
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essentially9
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2005-01-19 20:15:03]
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Re: Rape Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:17:30 PM AEST
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| Wow....Very powerful! |
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Re: Rape Me
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:17:43 PM AEST
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Waste me
With your need
Taint me
With your creed
Face me
With your dreams
Those lines I love..This was such a good post..The depth and the image I have from it is amazing..Your talent and your power grows each day. |
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Re: Rape Me
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:39:44 PM AEST
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Powerful and excelent.
Spazzo |
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Re: Rape Me
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by upomik on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:52:31 PM AEST
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This is a great poem! You are a very talented writer. What's the story behind this? I would love to know. :-)
Upomik |
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Re: Rape Me
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:53:48 PM AEST
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I find this poem sad and lonly. I'm sorry. But It is a very good poem.
Good Luck,
J~ |
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Re: Rape Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:55:23 AM AEST
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yes powerful, with a background of desolution.
This seems diffrent for you.
I hope all will be well! |
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Re: Rape Me
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by midian on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 07:22:51 PM AEST
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What an amazing poem.. so powerful, and yet so gentle.
"Take everything
And leave nothing
But pain to bleed"
I would have to say i feel those last lines more than the rest..
A Beautifal share xx midian |
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