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Daddy
Contributed by
xxbreexx
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:26:36 PM in AEST
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A father like no other
A friend one would die for
With eyes that made me smile
Made me love him even more
He pushed me on the swing
That day I would never forget
Playing out in the pouring rain
Coming home soaking wet
We made tents every night
And told stories together
In my heart I knew
He would be here forever
That one night
Asleep in my tent
I head a loud noise
That came from the basement
As I krept slowly down
I begin to see red
I see his body there
And a note that said
"If you are reading this, I must no longer be alive, You can try and try, I
will not revive. To my darling wife and daughter, I'm sorry, and I know its not fair .
But just cause you can't see me, doesn't mean I'm not there.Who ever finds me,
Let everyone know, I'll always be with them,and that I love them so."
Right then and there
I begin to cry
God why oh why
Did daddy have to die
I screamed for my mommy
She came running down
When she saw daddy
She fell to the ground
A few weeks later
They buried him deep
I tried to be strong
But I began to weep
After It was over
I looked up to see
Daddy's angel
looking down on me
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Re: Daddy
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by english-pea-pelter on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:35:03 PM AEST
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wonderful poetry. im so sorry. symathys to someone who found their brother with a slit throat. and another brother addicted to anti-depressents. i just posted a poem about my brother (his name is rupert) and its titled "my dear" comments appreciated. lovely read on this!!
much love ^^" english-pea-pelter |
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Re: Daddy
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by Blu on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:37:36 PM AEST
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Very good write. I'm sorry to hear about your loss, but atleast you have a creative avenue to let out the grief. Keep them coming.
Blu |
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Re: Daddy
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by XxBreexX on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:39:56 PM AEST
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thanks for ur comments everyone..i forgot to mention that this didnt happen to me..its not about me..tho, it is a relation of a friend of mine..
thanks everyone :D |
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Re: Daddy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:42:21 PM AEST
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My deepest sympathy goes out to you. Our fathers stay with us always...
By the way...don't be so down on yourself. You are quite talented. |
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Re: Daddy
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:13:56 PM AEST
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| Thats really good! I'm just sorry you had to experience that... |
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Re: Daddy
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:25:04 AM AEST
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| awesome!! well done |
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Re: Daddy
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by XxBreexX on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:38:28 PM AEST
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| THANKS EVERYONE BUT I SAID UP THERE THAT THIS DIDNT HAPPEN TO ME...BUT ITS A RELATION TO MY BEST FRIEND..THANK YOU EVERYONE :D |
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Re: Daddy
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:29:13 AM AEST
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Very depressing
hope this really didn't happen
it is a good write
totally changed my mood
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