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untiltled

Contributed by forgottenone_iam on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:51:15 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I love two different people that are
so opposite but in my mind so much a like.

I love them equally, but then again i love
one more then the other, i dont know what
to do, there smiles are the same when they look
at me, there eye's sparkle like crystals in water,
when the sun reflects off of them.

Something about these guyz that drew me in,
was that a mistake i made for likeing them, so much
about them that i was attracted to, they were the same
in my head, i would try and chose one over the other,
but it was impossible to do.

The sunset reminded me of the mountains where he once
lived, where we once met, what we talked about every
chance we had, ever moment i wanted to be with you,
see you again feel your arms wrapped around me as the
sun slowly goes out of site.

The moon and stary sky's remind me of the fair, where
i once said hi to you, where i got my first kiss that acutally,
ment something to me, something that i will never forget in
my life, kissing you under the night sky, there was something
special about that.

I love you both what should i do, every time i see a sunset
i wanna cry cuz i know i havent seen you in almost a year,
and its tearing me up inside, i just wish i could see you once
again to see if my feelings are true, then again when i see a
sky full of star's and a moon shining so bright, i wanna cry to
i think of you and your sweet kiss, everything in my life is special
i just wish i could choose which one i like more.

HELP PLZ!!!




Copyright © forgottenone_iam ... [ 2005-01-19 18:51:15]
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Re: untiltled (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:08:14 PM AEST
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If you are "in love" with both of them, then you don't love either of them enough. Trust me, I know from experience....=)
juliette


Re: untiltled (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:46:17 PM AEST
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You should get to know them each one at a time to learn which one u like more keep writing~chrissy




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