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Just to Cry
Contributed by
Rain_Dancer
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:11:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As you leave me here,
Just to cry,
I think that I,
Might just die,
As my heart quickly bleeds,
I fall to my knees,
And pray we would be together,
Enternaly,
At this window I shall last lie,
As I think "Surrender now or prepare to die,
Just to think,
Look at me now,
I really thought,
You would be proud,
Just to think I used to love you,
Now you make me,
intentionally blue....
Copyright ©
Rain_Dancer
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2005-01-19 17:11:35]
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Re: Just to Cry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:13:42 PM AEST
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| Good write. I liked it. |
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Re: Just to Cry
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by dragondaughter on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:59:29 PM AEST
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| The emotions behing the lines are very intense...well done... |
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Re: Just to Cry
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 12:23:48 PM AEST
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Wow a lot of emotions this was a good poem
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