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Untitled
Contributed by
freckle
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:39:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm feeling very suicidal lately
and as I talk to you I'm wondering if
you will be the one to push that button
that sends me spinning into the black abyss
reeling, reeling spinning
down I go
depression sickens me within my soul
reeling, reeling spinning
look at me
seems I've fallen into insanity
I'm feeling very suicidal lately
but quiet, let's not tell a soul
whisper in the darkness how ya feeling?
I whisper back...ya really want to know???
Copyright ©
freckle
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2005-01-19 16:39:41]
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:09:41 PM AEST
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| Good write. I liked the flow. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:03:23 PM AEST
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| Very dark & very painful..... a terrific poem! Though it is very dark there is a hint of beauty in your words..... Awesome!! |
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Re: Untitled
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by justinblue on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:10:46 PM AEST
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| not a bad write at all, keep theme comin |
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