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Another mind trip
Contributed by
zenmind
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:09:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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One, two, three
four more times,
a let down,
a space ant's music filled flame,
shot,
right between the lines,
into the potter's mouth,
left open for the unspoken lyrics,
songs,
tunes that fill the spirit,
left open for grace to bless itself.
With wide eyes he dances,
back and forth, growing
heart glances on the inside of his foot.
A splash awaits, rain
sprinkled on fingertips,
foreshadowing the long term event,
a cycle,
a mirror's reflection of one's mind,
tonight the secret will burst
and the loved one will transform the snow
into falling ambers.
There is a sly conviction that truth is well known,
yet a secret, seemingly placed
on the outside wall
is hidden from spotlights,
the eyes of the mind carved envelope,
an interestingly placed reminder of laughter
amidst slight grains pressed hard on lavender skin,
your skin, your eyes,
felt against mine.
And yet this is only the secret well, hidden,
drowned deep within the walls,
that create blind scene changes.
The truth is known.
It is always dug between the two holes,
the light fixture and the brown bag,
a special date for two,
legs spread,
scented fog lingering tunnels,
the fast memory, spaced far
between lights.
Continue down the street and collect the garbage.
Show respect for the concrete mass,
the man made jungle,
a principle for humanity,
that consists of the greatest triumphs
and worst fears,
that exist in time as history's father.
The final exit music for a film,
changed slightly at the sight.
Copyright ©
zenmind
... [
2005-01-19 16:09:40]
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Re: Another mind trip
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:14:18 PM AEST
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| Mind trip indeed! Interesting write! Cheers! |
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Re: Another mind trip
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:22:19 PM AEST
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A twisty-turny, topsy-turvy world in there, my friend!! I agree with TimeBot! Loved this piece though!! Excellent! Of course, it's surreal, of course it's beautiful, and of course, it's absolutely flawless!! Where does all this come from, Zenmind? I envy your semi-insane, yet utterly brilliant mind! lol!
A wonderful tribute to writing, just for the sake of it! Pen on, dearest friend! I await your next masterpiece with fervent anticipation! Much love! Ciao bello. Forever,
Your friend,
Fleur de Sang *Stephy* |
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Re: Another mind trip
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:15:54 PM AEST
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| This is really good! I love it! |
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