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i feel
Contributed by
visualizing_life
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i may never be what you want
you may never understand my ways
i feel the way you want me to
like nothing
i feel the hurt and pain you impose on me
like a weight over my heart
my love locked up
a ton of bricks over my lungs
i cant feel your love
i cant breathe
and soon ill be gone
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Re: i feel
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by tractorbabe on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:08:55 PM AEST
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now i understand wat u were tellin me..it all makes sence now...this is a great poem ..great way of disribing it...luv always
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Re: i feel
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:25:02 PM AEST
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| has a lot of potential. i wish this was longer. you do not need to ask for comments, your work is good enough to deserve it. |
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