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Wish
Contributed by
Beni
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:07:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Everyday I see her,
She looks so happy and smiley,
So pretty and friendly,
No one would have thought a thing
Wish I could have helped her,
Her secret stayed with her,
No one had a clue,
The sadness inside of her,
The depression and anger,
Wish I could have helped her
So many problems,
No one to turn to,
The emotions grew stronger,
Wish I could have helped her.
I saw the scars on her arms,
The pain she must have felt,
Now I understand what was wrong,
But now its too late,
Wish I could have helped her.
Gone forever,
Never to see again,
The girl with her bottled up emotions,
Now in the skies above,
Wish I could have helped her
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Beni
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2005-01-19 14:07:46]
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Re: Wish
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:19:16 PM AEST
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| That is sooooooooo sad!! Is about you? Or who is about! Well done! Luv ya xx |
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Re: Wish
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 03:08:45 PM AEST
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Beni this is marvellous.
Infinitely sad - a missed opportunity to heal a heart.
How often it happens we will never know, it's simply tragic how people could prevent such hopeless heartache and pain by anticipating by trying a little bit how the other one feels.
So few have this great gift. "Anticipating" and prevent a heart from breaking.
Beautiful poem that tells you about this tragedy.
Love and peace
Elizabeth Dandy |
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