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Winter’s Spite
Contributed by
newewe
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:13:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Winter’s Spite
Pungent wafting the foul of night
Amid winters fading green
Waterway stilled by dark of night
Frigid splendor halts my stride
What vile distract of pastures gone
This be endured
However slight of stoic plain
Grating ward and outland waif
Recall past fortnight seasons ode
Embrace enraptured flush and warm
Her voice soothed beasts of feral ways
Remembrance disdainful yet not to be
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newewe
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2005-01-19 13:13:26]
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Re: Winter’s Spite
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by Azul_Panther on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:31:21 PM AEST
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| wow, thats deep. Nice word structure and it is very inspiring. |
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Re: Winter’s Spite
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:36:59 PM AEST
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| I don't understand this..don't hope to. To me it looks like words strung together without meaning.. I have no cognizant understanding I guess.. |
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Re: Winter’s Spite
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by juliette on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:15:16 PM AEST
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Impressive! I won't pretend to understand it either.....giggle,giggle, but I have found my own meaning in it and sometimes that is what it is all about, what the reader takes away with your words.
Thanks for sharing.
You have true talent!
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