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Departure at 1:43pm
Contributed by
lizabeth283
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 12:37:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Shattered, crushed- all alone
With no one there for me
Broken, hurt- forever more
And no one seems to see
Whimper, weep- all alone
I tried to hold it in
Sniffle, sob- forever more
Again I didn't win
Repair, mend- all alone
I wish we never met
Restore, fix- forever more
Just trying to forget
Listless, limp- all alone
A bleeding heart that cries
Sluggish, slow- forever more
A heart now slowly dies
Copyright ©
lizabeth283
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2005-01-19 12:37:21]
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Re: Departure at 1:43pm
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by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:24:26 PM AEST
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I'm in the same boat so I know exactly how you feel. Although I'm still glad that I met her :) I've found that it's almost impossible to forget love, it's always gonna be there. Beautiful write though, I enjoyed it...
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Re: Departure at 1:43pm
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:40:35 PM AEST
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| the forever more reminds me of poe.. a little too much maybe.. The Raeven? |
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