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Every Time I Fall in Love (with you)
Contributed by
TheRaven
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 12:12:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The sensation I experience
every time I fall in love
with you is one of
pleasuer and complete charm.
Like jets roaring overhead
so does my heart as your
fingers fly across my back.
Exciting my mind with your
tantalizing smile is all
a part of your game,
this game of teasing souls
on a merry-go-round
of thoughts that drives
me mad with joy.
Hoping I can dream with
you tonight, I can't let
these feelings die; because
every time I fall in love
with you I know it's real,
as I look into your eyes
and see how you feel.
-The Raven-
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TheRaven
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2005-01-19 12:12:03]
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Re: Every Time I Fall in Love (with you)
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:05:31 PM AEST
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| I would like to see the lines separated at different points.. but what do I know? |
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Re: Every Time I Fall in Love (with you)
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:22:33 PM AEST
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how touching in it's innocences i like what this says and the way u say it, such a splended peice of writting . . .
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Re: Every Time I Fall in Love (with you)
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by arden on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:35:34 AM AEST
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beautiful poem, very touching and sweet.
nicely written. i enjoyed this.
very well done.
Arden |
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Re: Every Time I Fall in Love (with you)
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:16:21 PM AEST
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| I try to keep away from love poems even though I wrote a helluva lot months back..Anyhow this was very well wrote.I liked your style and the flow was great.Good work. |
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Re: Every Time I Fall in Love (with you)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:32:43 PM AEST
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| Flows well and very romantic! |
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Re: Every Time I Fall in Love (with you)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:53:02 AM AEST
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| This is an absolutely stunning write. So beautiful and honest. Great, great job. |
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