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in the eye of the beholder
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:53:24 AM in AEST
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words splash across the paper,
i sweat over a blank canvas.
a smoke filled room with a closet of shrooms,
struggling to adjust my comfort on the arm of the couch,
a sweet herbal lotus,concealed in a pouch.
my muse,my vice,my attempted artistry,
if my words all bleed from me and i can no longer write,
if my passion dies i can no longer fight,
if i loose imagination....... i have lost all sight.
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Re: in the eye of the beholder
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:17:07 PM AEST
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| This is interesting. "herbal lotus" hmmm... Yeah, seeing beauty in the ugly part of life is something I strive for. Thanks for writing this! Cheers! |
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Re: in the eye of the beholder
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:39:06 PM AEST
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Good write. My favorite lines are:
"if my words all bleed from me and i can no longer write,
if my passion dies i can no longer fight
if i loose imagination.....i have lost all sight"
Very deep. Much peace. Laura |
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Re: in the eye of the beholder
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:51:54 PM AEST
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OH, JUST FLAWLESS TILL THE VERY END!!! Impeccable imagery, beautiful expressions, a bittersweet song that should be heard by all. Incredible. Such intense emotion, a voice through the fog, screaming "Listen to my legacy!!" This masterpiece has left me breathless and very much inspired. Dear friend, thank you so much for sharing this with us. Your talent shines brilliantly through, and all are blinded. This poem makes me proud to be a poet. Gorgeous, in every way conceivable. Merci once again. All my love. Forever,
Your friend/fan,
Stephy. *Fleur* |
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