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Contributed by
Jen54
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:32:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My pain cannot be healed
My heart it has no shield
With my eyes so full of tears
And my thoughts full of fears
All I can do is cry
I just wish that I could die
Please take me from this place
And put a smile on my face
Do you hear my cries
See the pain within my eyes
I know that this is best
So now lay me down to rest
When I go don't be sad
Don't be angry or mad
Just know that I am free
Death is the key
I need a way out
Pain is what my life is about
Now there are no more tomorrows
I have said goobye to all my sorrows
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2005-01-19 11:32:04]
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Re: Me
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 12:16:33 PM AEST
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| This troubles me. I'm reading too many poems of this type. I pray I don't hurt you, but, Don't you think if one thought a little less of, "me, me, me, and, ( as the Bible says ) esteem others before oneself ( Phil.2:3 ) that the depression would go away? You may find a lot to love in this wicked world - worthy of your love. I get depressed too, sometimes because of indwelling sin. ( What I would I do not, yet that I would not; that do I. Oh, wretched man that I am, etc ) Rom. 7:18-24 Now - shouldn't we trust Christ to be our advocate with the father in this? God bless you. |
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Re: Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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| Sad and powerful. Great write. Hope you know that you are a great poet and that the mere fact that you can write like this is a fact enough that there are those who would miss your talents. I am sure this is a great expression of thoughts only and you know that there are those who appreciate you. |
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