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Eternal Dreams of Suicide
Contributed by
crazylady
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:34:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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eternal dreams of suicide
always in my head
eternal dreams of suicide
itd be better if i were dead
eternal dreams of suicide
folow me to bed
eternal dreams of suicide
draw ever near
eternal dreams of suicide
i do not seem to fear
dreams are only dreams
little things to see
dreams are only dreams
not always what they seem
dreams are only dreams
but in the end this dream might be
reality
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2005-01-19 10:34:19]
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Re: Eternal Dreams of Suicide
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:40:51 AM AEST
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i really liked this,it was awesome,and expressed really well,great job,keep'em comen
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Re: Eternal Dreams of Suicide
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:48:36 AM AEST
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| Good rhyme, bad content. Suicide's a copout. Hope and pray you find saving faith and persevere. God bless |
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Re: Eternal Dreams of Suicide
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:47:43 PM AEST
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| Hope it's not your reality and just words in a good poem. : ) |
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Re: Eternal Dreams of Suicide
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by sojourner on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:18:44 PM AEST
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Interesting poem, death is the last journey we
all must take some day ,put it on hold, for once you end it here you can't come back ,so keep on writing.
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